Here's one example from the McFetridge book, A Little More Free, the scene the aftermath of a fatal fire, relatives learning that their loved ones have died:
"There were other people inside. It was quiet for a minute and then Dougherty heard the crying."
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"`Sixty-five cents for a pint? We should arrest you.'"Another plus: Unless McFetridge or his publisher, ECW Press, made changes between unbound galley and finished book, the police photographer Rozovsky, a sidekick in McFetridge's Black Rock, gets a first name this time.
© Peter Rozovsky 2015

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